Max and the Gatekeeper

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Monday, April 21, 2014

New Story Chapter 2

Okay, here is chapter 2 as promised.  Again, it is very very unedited. :)  Let me know what you think.


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            Flit screamed as the demon howled with rage.  Both of them scrambled back away from the wall of fire at the same time.  As soon as the Demon retreated far enough from the flames into the forest, the wall of thorns returned.
            The demon’s eyes burned red with a flame of their own, staring Flit down.  The beast it rode roared, snapping its jaws at him.  Then the demon spurred its mount and road away.  The monster’s massive body, causing the ground to shake with each bound. 
            Flit’s heart continued to pound for several minutes after the demon disappeared.  He remained on the ground starring at the opening in the thorns.  How am I to get home? Am I trapped here? A prisoner?
            It wasn’t until after the sun had set and darkness began to settle in that Flit realized he had sat motionless for quite some time.  He rose to his feet and the crying started again.  The ghosts! His anxiety returned.  He glanced around searching for any hint of the white specters but nothing moved except the water in the fountains. 
            Flit decided to find a spot to wait out the night.  I just wish the sobbing would stop.  How am I to sleep with that crying?  Please let those spirits stay way. He found a spot under one of the fountains where it would protect him on three sides.  He crawled into the opening and curled into a ball, wrapping his arms around his legs.
            The darker it grew the louder the wailing grew.  Every now and then Flit made out a word or two. 
            “Why?” the voice would ask.  “I loved you,” it bemoaned. “You betrayed me,” it lamented.
            Flit started to tremble.  The constant crying began to wear on his nerves.  He wondered if the man was a ghost or something else. 
            As night continued to take over, the gardens grew increasingly darker and darker.  The gardens had a strange glow Flit had never seen before.  He could make out the shapes of trees and shrubs better than he had ever done before.  He couldn’t distinguish colors but definitely trees and bushes.  Every now and then a small flash of light would blink, traveling across the gardens.  They appeared to be floating slowly in all directions. There was also an abundance of the usual night time insects making their normal racket.
            What are they? A trick of some kind to lure me out of hiding? 
            He adjusted his position to relieve some discomfort and gain a better view of the area.  The wailing continued to come and go, but seemed distant with this new development to hold his attention.  He checked for anything else moving about the gardens, with no results.
            The strange silvery light that covered everything in the gardens seemed to be shifting at a very slow pace.  It had originally been about three feet or more away from him but was now only a foot or so.  With each passing moment it inched closer. 
            Flit’s heart started to race and his mouth grew dry as he looked for anything waiting out in the darkness.  After not spotting anything, he nervously extended his hand out towards the strange sliver light.  He paused a moment before finally pushing his hand out into the glow.  He didn’t feel anything unusual on his skin.  There was no warmth or coolness to the light’s touch.  He noticed his hand created a shadow on the ground telling him it was a type of light source.
            “It’s moonlight,” a female voice spoke in his ear causing Flit to jump and smack his head on the stone above him.
            He wrapped his hands around his head and gritted his teeth.  Tears formed in his eyes and it took several moments for the pain to subside.  He fought the urge to vent his pain with any noise, hoping to avoid any more interaction with the unseen. 
            He tried to wet his lips with his tongue while his eyes danced around. “Please leave me alone,” he whimpered.
            “You will need us if you want to get past the demon,” another voice spoke and the ghostly form of a blond woman in a white dress swirled around in front of his hidings spot before disappearing.
            “T—the d—demon?” Flit stuttered and the image of the black creature flashed across the front of his mind.
            “He controls the boarder of these gardens.” A redheaded apparition materialized for a brief moment and then dissipated. “You won’t escape him without our help.”
            “Y—you want to help me?” Flit’s voice was barely a whisper.
            “Yes,” several female voices spoke at once and two different female ghosts glided in and out of his view.  “You are very special, Flit.”
            “Me?” Flit started to gain a little courage, speaking a little louder.  “I’m nothing.  Not even for a malo.  I don’t even have any real friends.”
            “You have a good heart, Flit,” the original blond spoke, appearing and then fading. “You can come out, we will not harm you.”
            “I’m scared,” Flit acknowledged. “What if you are just tricking me? Luring me to my death?”
            There were several giggles.
            “We have been waiting for you for centuries.  We need you,” the redhead stated.  “Our father needs you, Flit.”
            “Your father?” Flit questioned, thinking he hadn’t seen any male ghosts.
            “Yes, he is the creator,” another female specter appeared and zipped by his hiding place.
             “Creator?” Flit poked his head out a little farther to follow her until she vanished.
            “He created this world,” another female mist appeared right in front of Flit’s face and then floated backwards away from him.
            Flit flinched but recovered quickly.  Curiosity tugged at his mind and he wanted to know more.  “Of this garden, you mean?” He slipped out of his hiding spot to sit cross-legged on the ground in front of the fountain.  The strange silvery light descended on him from a strange beautiful white orb in the sky.  “What is that?”
            “It is one of the moons of Eilisor.  It is only seen from these gardens anymore,” the redhead materialized for a few moments. 
            “The pollutions of Hadder, hide many beautiful things from the eyes of Eilisor,” a different spirit flew by. 
            “Haddar!” Flit shivered.  Everyone living in the world of Eilisor feared the name.  He controlled Eilisor with blood and dark magic.  The malos told terrifeing tells how their people where used as entertainment in Haddar’s arenas.  Hundreds of malos ripped to pieces and gobbled up by horrifying creatures.
            “Yes, Haddar’s evil covers all the lands.  Only this garden is safe from his influence,” the blond spoke.  “He is not strong enough to enter here, but he guards our borders with the demon you saw.”
            “To keep you in or to keep others out?” Flit swallowed, realizing he was now part of the first equation.
            “Both, but more to keep anyone from leaving,” several ghosts responded at the same time.
            “Then how am I to get home?  How am I to get back to my people?” Flit felt panic starting to spread through his body.  “Why didn’t he stop me from coming in?”
            “He didn’t see you as a threat.  But he does now,” the redhead spoke.  “You have eaten the fruit.  Your eyes are open a little.”
            “What?” Flit shook his head.  “Why would that matter?”
            “All the fruit of these gardens have magical properties.  We were trying to talk to you before you tasted it, but your eyes were shut and you couldn’t see.  It wasn’t until after you had eaten the fruit that we could appear to you.  The same with the demon.  He knows you know and will hunt you wherever you go,” the blond stated.
            “So, I’m trapped here…forever!”
            “No, we can aid you.  Besides our father has a great work for you to do,” the redhead said. 
            “But I don’t want a demon hunting me.  Why would anyone want me, a malo, to help them?  I’m a nobody,” Flit protested.  Goose pimples spread across his body at the thought of that terrifying demon running him down.
            “You heard the father’s voice and you see the gardens.  You are the first,” a brunette ghost swirled around him.
            “I…I what?  I didn’t hear any man’s voice and how could anyone miss this beautiful garden’s.  That is if they get through the thorns.”  Flit held out his arms in the moonlight, searching for scratches and puncture wounds, but his skin was smooth without any marks.
            “You heard him crying,” a couple of ghosts stated together.
            “T—that was your father?  And why is he crying?” Flit questioned.
            “Because all of his creations are corrupted and evil,” another spoke, doing a pirouette in front of him and then dancing away.
            Flit now marveled at the beauty in these strange misty creatures.  He noticed how he felt a strange joy being in their presence.  “His creations?”
            “Yes, he is the father of all.  Even you Flit,” the blond stated rolling over and over as she zipped by. 
              “But his son rebelled against him and uses his powers to control and conquer life everywhere,” another woman appeared right in front of his face and then dissipated.
            “Who is his son?”
            “Haddar!” they all hissed.
            “Hadder is the father’s son?” Flit tilted his head to the side.
            “Yes, he was destined to rule Eilisor in peace and justice, but he is evil.  He abused and twisted his powers,” still another spirit spoke.
            There were so many flying around, Flit had trouble tracking them all.
            “And what does the father need me for?” Flit questioned.
            “To kill Haddar,” they all spoke at once.
            It felt like a huge weight had dropped onto Flit’s shoulders and he struggled for air.  “Y—you w—want me to k—kill Haddar.  He will have me drawn and quartered and then let things start to eat me alive before I die. How can I, a single malo, take on not only Haddar the most powerful being on Eilisor but his vast armies which are as great as the sands on the sea.”
            “You already showed great promise.  Others have entered these gardens but have failed to see them.  Only the pure in heart can do so.  If your heart wasn’t pure, you would have only seen a decaying overgrown garden with no fruit or working fountains,” the redhead told him. 
            “Did any of them leave?” Flit swallowed.
            “None survived,” a couple of spirits stated. 
            “What happened t—to them?”
            “The demon killed them.  The demon killed them.  The demon killed them,” the all repeated.
            “And you want me to k—kill Haddar.  I’m not going to make it out of these thorns.” Flit rose to his feet and waved his arms at the thorny walls.  His fear of these spirts vanished faster than the ghosts themselves and he paced around the area.  The pressure of being trapped or slaughtered by a demon squeezing his thoughts.  “And poor Jett.  The camp must be wondering what happened to us.”
            “I will help you,” a deep calming voice spoke, stopping Flit in his tracks. 
            Flit glance all around but could only see the gardens and the swirling female specters.  “Who was that?”
            “The creator,” the soft female voices spoke. 
            Fear of being asked to do something he didn’t want to do, forced Flit to stop asking questions.  He slunk back to his hole and crawled inside, wrapping himself into a ball.  He lay on his side watching the female ghosts come and go until he couldn’t keep his eyes open any longer.
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            Flit awoke to birds chirping.  He was rather annoyed at the chatterers as he was having one of the best night’s sleeps he could ever remember.  Their song carried a happy tune which seemed strange to Flit.  “Where did those buggers come from?” he grumbled and then his eyes snapped open.  The Gardens.
            His heart started to thump inside his chest.  He lay motionless, using his eyes to search for the ghost or anything else.  He stayed still until the pain in his hip and shoulder became unbearable, so he slowly crawled out of his hiding place.  He took a long drink from the fountain after verifying he was alone.
            The hunger pangs in his stomach led him to the fruit trees where he ate his fill once more.  He discovered he still had one of the sacks he and Jet were to use for gathering berries and loaded it full. 
            “It will not survive beyond the borders of the thorns,” a female voice spoke in his ear, causing him to drop the bag, spilling fruit all over the ground.
            “It will rot,” another stated from a different location.
            Flit glanced around after regaining his composure.  He recognized the voices from the night before.  In the daylight, he couldn’t see any ghosts or spirits.   A sudden knot in his stomach replaced the light feeling he had after convincing himself that last night had been a dream.  It wasn’t the fact the ghosts were real that bothered him, but if they were there and the demon would be too.  This also meant the desire they had for him to kill Haddar remained.
            “I just want to go home,” Flit pleaded after a few minutes of silence.  His chest heaved as if he struggled for breath. 
            “And so you shall,” the deep male voice responded. “You will need help.  I do not expect you to defeat Haddar on your own.” I brilliant flame appeared, burning in the air.  It hovered above the ground about two feet and rose up in a pillar of fire.  It consumed no fuel to feed its flames.
            “But I’m a nobody.  Friendless.  Even my own people don’t like me,” Flit stated, trying to make a case for avoiding this responsibility.  “I can’t even defend myself, let alone win some battle.  I won’t make it past the demon.”
            A brisk wind whipped through the trees, causing Flit to turn his head to keep loose flying debris from getting in his eyes.  The wind flew around him and then disappeared.  When Flit opened his eyes a beautiful white flower with five large pedals spun around as it floated down from the air above him.  Flit caught it out of the air and then noticed it belonged to the tree the wind had started from.
            “Take this flower and keep it safe.  It will hide you from the eyes of the demon,” the deep soothing voice stated.  “You must never let it out of your possession.  If you should lose it, the demon will know where you are and come for you.”
            “How can a flo…”
            “It is a special flower.  It will stay alive for several weeks.  You must return before the last pedal falls.  For a dead flower will have the same results as losing it,” the creator spoke.
            “Why do I need to come back?” Flit asked.
            “To stay alive and to learn,” the voice stated and the pillar of fire started to die.
            “What am I to learn?” Flit asked.
            “Patience.  First you must learn patience and to follow instructions.  Return before the last pedal falls,” the voice grew fainter and the flames were almost gone.
            “WAIT!” Flit stretched forth his hand toward the disappearing fire.
            “Show the flower to no one.  Thieves will be drawn to its beauty.” The pillar vanished.

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